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2011年江苏高考英语作文

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篇一:2011年江苏高考英语作文

第五部分:书面表达(满分25分)

81.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情

景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容:

1.描述照片内容,如情景、人物、动作,等等;

2.结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想;

3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

注意:

1.可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示,作

必要的发挥想象。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for

years, but the load of parents has received little

attention, especially from their own children.

此次的书面表达是一篇漫画类作文,是考纲中一直出现,但是首次露面的题型。这篇漫画类作文的话题很传统,体现的是学生所熟悉的“感恩”的内容,但是图中的提示,与其他省市以往的中文提示不同,这次使用了英文提示,但是英文提示不难。本解析将从谋篇,遣词,造句,逻辑四方面展开。

(一)谋篇——三步走

学生拿到漫画类作文,首先精读文字部分,确定写作主题是”感恩”,感情是“褒义”的,其次根据中文提示,按照“描述图片”“联系生活”“个人见解”三步走战略来谋篇。

1.“描述图片”应该包括何人,何事和何感受。

何人:a little girl and her working mom

何事:A little girl comes to greet her working mom happily. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work ,the little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder .Meanwhile,her mom kneels down .

何感受:The mom is thankful and delighted .Seeing this ,we are all touched .

所以第一段可以写成:The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom happily. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work ,the little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder .In response ,the mom kneels down to show how thankful and delighted she feels .

2.“联系生活”段落中,可以写两方面。一:反应了何种人,二是该人的做法是什么。以“感恩”为主题的作文,学生可以结合自身实际,说一下,自己有没有做到给父母减负。所以:

何人: my mom and I

该人的做法(一般是贬义):Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels ,and always think studying well is the only thing I could

do in return.

3.“个人见解”则是根据“该人的做法”给出相应的解决方式。这边可以说一下自己将来准备怎么给父母“减负”

可以参考:I will spare no effort to help with the everyday washing ,bedroomcleaning.In addition ,I’ll try my best to prepare breakfast myself ,so as to share mother’s daily burden .

最后来一个升华句:“Being a good daughter outweighs being a good student.”

(二)遣词———三原则

高考写作中的遣词可以遵循三原则:复杂原则,多变原则和温暖原则。复杂原则是指可以用一些“牛词”来代替一些“土词“比如说,“忙于做某事”,一般的说法是:be busy doing sth,使用复杂原则后,我们可以用be engaged in doing sth.;be absorbed in sth;be buried in sth 等。多变原则就是当文章中要写两处相同中文意思的词时,善于用不同的词或者词组代换,比如最后一段,两处写到“努力”就可以使用不同的短语“spare no effect”和“try one’s best”。温暖原则就是,任何一个名词都可以用一个形容词,或者定语从句,或者是同位语从句来修饰,比如这边的working mum,就比“mum”形象得多;任何一个动词或者形容词都可以由一个副词来修饰,如:“a little girl comes to greet her working mom happily”中的happily 就对该剧中的come这个动词起到了温暖的作用。

(3)造句——三套路

书面表达中的句子也很讲技巧,可以遵循三套路:适当拉长,英式思维,闪光句式。首先适当拉长,可以运用定语从句,并列结构,插入语等方式使得句子变得更加的丰满。“In response ,the mom kneels down to show how thankful and delighted she feels .”这边的“in response”就是一个插入成分。其次是英式思维,要做到不是一直以人作为主语,宁否定不肯定以及宁被动不主动等。如 “Being a good daughter outweighs being a good student.” 就用了动名词做主语。最后是闪光句式,就是用一些比较出彩的句式,比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个句式中,运用到了非谓语动词,分词作状语的形式。

(四)逻辑——八联系

好的文章除了合理的篇章,出彩的字词,还离不开好的逻辑,这个时候,新东方课堂上总结的八大逻辑词就派上了用场。比如说表示让步我们可以用but, yet, however,转折 although,though, despite,in spite of;表示并列我们可以用both?and, as well as, neither?nor,递进:in addition, besides, moreover,因果:because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, on account of等词。

很多同学提到高考英语写作都会谈虎色变,因为有无数的高考猛士都惨败在它的手下,失分很严重。其实高考英语英语写作并没有想象中的那么难,只要我们细心品题,精准的使用词和短语,恰到好处的套用句型,合理的安排篇章,高分也不是特别的遥远。当然高考英语写作想有质的飞跃,还是需要大家在平时不断积累的。

one possible version:

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children.

The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally enagaed in my own study, I seldom pay my attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.

篇二:2011年江苏高考英语作文word

2011年江苏高考英语作文word

81.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照

片的理解用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容:

1. 描述照片内容,如情景、人物、动作,等等;2.结合自身实际,谈谈

你的感想;3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

注意:

1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示,作必要的发挥想象。 ........

2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents

has received little attention,especially from their own children.

The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom.Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day’s work,the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.In response ,the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best.But,totally engaged in my own study,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels,and always think studying well is the only thing Icould do in return.Now Iknow I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing,bedroom cleaning,or at least prepare breakfast myself ,so as to share mother’s daily burden.The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student.

篇三:2011年上海高考英语作文解析

2011年上海高考英语作文解析

一、2011年上海高考英语写作中关于联合国基金会组织背景

联合国儿童基金会(United Nations International Children's Emergency Fund, 简称UNICEF),原名联合国国际儿童紧急救助基金会,于1946年12月11日创建,其目的是满足战后欧洲与中国儿童的紧急需求。1950年起,它的工作扩展到满足全球所有发展中国家儿童和母亲的长期需求。1953年,UNICEF成为联合国系统的永久成员,隶属联合国系统,受联合国大会的委托,致力于实现全球各国儿童的生存、发展、受保护和参与的权利。United Nations Children's Fund was created by the United Nations General Assemblyon December 11, 1946, to provide emergency food and healthcare to children in countries that had been devastated by World War II. In 1953, UNICEF became a permanent part of the United Nations System and its name was shortened from the original UnitedNations International Children's Emergency Fund but it has continued to be known by the popular acronym based on this old name. Headquartered in New York City, UNICEFprovides long-term humanitarian and developmental assistance to children and mothers in developing countries. It is one of the members of the United Nations Development Group and its Executive Committee.

UNICEF relies on contributions from governments and private donors and UNICEF's total income for 2006 was $2,781,000,000. Governments contribute two thirds of the organization's resources; private groups and some 6 million individuals contribute the rest through the National Committees. UNICEF's programs emphasize developingcommunity-level services to promote the health and well-being of children. UNICEF was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize in 1965 and the Prince of Asturias Award of Concord in 2006.

二、2011年上海高考英语作文申请信件一些经典句式

本次2011年高考上海英语卷作文体裁是写一封申请信,这里给大家补充一些写申请信常用的句式

(一)开头常用句式

1. Your advertisement made me unable to wait to write this application for the post because I think I have the qualifications you are seeking.

2. I am writing to apply for the advertised post of …

3. I would like to apply for admission to your college.

4. I would like to further my studies in … department of your honored university.

5. I would like to apply for the graduate program of … in your university.

6. I would like to apply for the scholarship that your department offers to students from other countries.

7. I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in … towards a master’s degree in your university.

8. I would like to apply for admission to your graduate school of ..

(二)结尾常用句式

1. Looking forward to your favorable reply.

2. I hope you will kindly send me an application form.

3. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.

4. I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.

5. I would be very grateful if you would consider my application and could send me some information about the scholarship.

6. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to your reply.

7. I would be grateful if you can grant me an early reply about the result of my application.

8. If any scholarships are available, I would appreciate it if you would send me the necessary application forms.

9. I hope my academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.

(三)其他常用句式

1. I have obtained my BA in … from University.

2. I am a senior student now and expect my graduation next summer from … University.

3. I major in … and did some research work during my undergraduate years.

4.Since graduation I have been working in … which specializes in…

5. Now I am particularly interested in…

6. Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about …

7. I hope to further continue my research on …

8. Enclosed please find two letters of recommendation and my transcript.

9. I am interested in your MA programs in …, and wish to enter this program. My background is as follows: …

(四)求职申请信常用句型

1. In reply to your advertisement in ~,I respectfully offer my services for the situation.

2. With reference to your advertisement in ~ for a / an ~,I offer myself for the post.

3. Please consider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in ~.

4. Having noticed the enclosed(来自:WWw.hn1c.com 唯 才教 育 网:2011年江苏高考英语作文) advertisement in ~,I wish to apply for the position referred to.

5. In answer to your advertisement in ~ for a ~,I wish to tender my services.

6. Your advertisement for a ~ in ~ has interested me. I feel I can fill that position.

7.Shall you need an experienced ~ for your ~ next summer?

8. I have been for over five years in the employment of a / an ~ company

9. I have been in the business for the last ~ years, and worked as the director of the…department.

10. I've had ~ years' experience with a company as a ~.

11. For the last ~ years, I have been and still am a / an ~.

12. I'm ~ years of age, female / male, and have had ~ years' experience in a limited company's ~ office

13. I should be very glad to have a personal interview and can furnish references if desired.

14. If you desire an interview, I shall be most happy to call in person, on any day and at any time you may appoint.

15. Should you think favorably of my application, kindly grant me an interview.

16. I trust that you'll give this application your favorable consideration.

17. Should you give me a trial, I'll do my utmost to afford you every satisfaction.

三、2011年上海高考英语作文参考范文

2011上海高考英语题目:

若你是明启中学李明,想申请一个扶贫项目,帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。

启示:国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目,以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。

信中请包括:

1. 你个人基本情况

2. 你对申请项目具体设想

3. 项目经费使用情况

这类作文在篇章布局上可以用最常见的“总-分-总”的框架。首先,总起全文,介绍自己并说明得知国际儿童基金将开展扶贫项目,非常想申请此项目。接着,第二段说明自己的想法和具体的方案。这里提供两个方案供大家参考:1、买文具,日常生活用品。2、买教科书,或者号召同学募捐旧书,等等。最后,总结全文,表达自己非常热切地想申请到这个扶贫项目。望国际儿童基金能尽早回复。

范文一:

Dear Sirs,

Hello! I’m Li Ming, a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai. As I’ve always been interested in charity, I’m writing to you in the hope that I could be given the 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poverty-stricken areas.

My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts. In the initial stage, I’ll try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths. Given that new books are usually expensive, I’ll be on the look-out for good-quality second-hand books. The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas. Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge to be qualified teachers. Lastly, we will set out

for primary schools, which are selected and contacted in advance, to carry out our program.As to how to allocate the money, I’d like to use 1,000 for textbooks, and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.

I am looking forward to your reply, thanks!

Yours,

Li Ming

亮点词组句型归纳:

1.be interested in 对…感兴趣

2.write to someone in the hope that 写信给某人以期(实现某愿望)

3.carry out 履行

4.poverty-stricken 贫困的

5.poverty-relief 扶贫的

6.given 考虑到

7.be on the look-out for 寻找

8.meet more demands 满足更多的需求

9.recruit 招募

10. qualified 有资格的

11. set out for 出发前往

12. in advance 提前

13. allocate 分配

范文二:

Dear Sirs,

My name is Li Ming and I’m a student from Mingqi High School. As I have grownup in the city, lending a hand to my rural peer group has always been my dream. I’m writing to apply for the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund that I have heard about recently.

In fact, there are still a large number of school-age children who have no access to good education in the undeveloped regions of our country. So, I sincerely hope that I cando something to make a difference by making full use of your program. If I can get the supporting money, first, I will use some parts of it to buy the textbooks they need. Since the fund is limited, I will try to buy some second-hand reading materials for theirfree-time reading. Besides, I have to keep a small sum of money in order to pay the postal charges.

Last but not least, I will feel honored if I can get the fund to start the poverty-reliefprogram in our country and I will try my best to use the fund. I’m looking forward to your reply!

Yours,Li Ming

亮点词组句型归纳:

1. lend a hand to 帮助…

2. apply for 申请

3. the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund由国际儿童基金会发起的扶贫项目

4. school-age children 学龄儿童

5. have no access to good education接受不到良好的教育

6. undeveloped region 欠发达地区

7. make a difference 有影响

8. make use of 利用

篇四:2011年江苏英语高考作文讲解

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(一)如何写议论文

1. 议论文亦称说理文、论说文,是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文 体。论点、论据、和论证是不可缺少的三要素。 2. 议论文的语言特点: 1) 时 态 的 使 用 相 对 比 较 广 泛 , 根 据 行 文 的 需 要 可 以 使 用 任 何 时 态 ; 2) 主 动 语 态 、 陈 述 句 式 为 主 , 被 动 语 态 和 虚 拟 语 气 在 议 论 文 中 也 经 常 使 用 ; 3) 恰当地使用过渡词语和一些固定句型。 3. 议论文常用的逻辑联系词语包括:in my opinion, personally, clearly, obviously, surely, undoubtedly, moreover, besides, in addition, what’s more, additionally, furthermore, first(ly), to begin with, second (ly), last(ly), first of all, most important of all, on the other hand, worse still, on the contrary, as a result / consequence, consequently , generally speaking, in short, all in all, in conclusion, in brief,for the sake of, hence, last but not the least(最 后但同样重要的是) 等。 4.议论文不同类型模板: 1).不同观点列举型(选择型) 不同观点列举型( 不同观点列举型 选择型) : There is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目 . But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. Some people think that 观点一. In their views, there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, 原因一 . Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二 . People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that 观点二 . In their point of view, on the one hand, 原因一 . On the other hand, 原因二 . Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二 . As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二 . It is not only because , but also because . The more , the more ./ On when we… can we do. 2).权衡利弊型: 权衡利弊型: 权衡利弊型 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that) 作文题目 .In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in 题目议题 . Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspect as follows. Firstly, 优点一 . And secondly, 优 点二 . Just as a popular saying goes, every coin has two sides and 讨论议题 is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一 . In addition, 缺点二 . To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题 into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we definitely make a better use of the 讨论议题 . 3).问题与建议: 问题与建议: 问题与建议 In recent days, we have to face a problem that . 解决方法:With the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it. By doing , we can. What’s the most important is that. 结论: In a word, it is clear/obvious that . Only when can we.

(二)描述图表

【写作指导】 高考中的图表作文要求考生在对图表中相关数据进行仔细说明、分析、比较的基础上, 归纳出数据的增减变量,从而总结出图表所反映的主题、意向、趋势和潜在含义,继而 从中推导出合乎逻辑的结论和看法。考生可从以下三个方面着手: 1.开门见山地点明该该图表所反映的主题。经常使用的词汇有:table, chart, figure, graph, describe, tell, show, represent 等。 2.分析数据见的主要差异及趋势,可采用分类式或对比式,并阐明理由。 1) 写好图表作文的关键是记住一些常用的词和短语。例如: 描述图表变化趋势

的词语: 描述图表变化趋势的词语: 上升:increase/ rise/ go up/ shoot up; 下降:decrease/ reduce/ come down/ decline/ drop/ fall; 快:quickly/ rapidly/ sharply/ dramatically; 慢:slowly/ gradually/ slightly;

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持续不变:level off/ remain steady/ remain unchanged 常用句型:在表格描述中常用 as-clause。 如: As is shown in…;As can be seen from…。 ; 表达比较与对比法常用句式与词语: 表达比较与对比法常用句式与词语: There are a lot of similarities between … and…;…is similar to…;similarly, likewise, in comparison, just like; The difference between … and … lies in…;on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand 分析原因的词语: lead to, result in, cause, be responsible for, account for, contribute to 表示一段时间始末的词组: between 1986 and 1990; during/over the period from 1986 to 1990… 2) 重点要突出:在行文过程中要注意,不要盲目地引用过多的或全部的表格上数据,不 要做毫无目的、没有主次的数据的堆砌。除了可以直接引用有代表性的关键数字外,应 该有目的地进行简单的计算,指出增减的百分比、倍数或绝对数字来。 3.归纳总结或发表看法。 常用短语和句型: in a word, in short, It’s clear from the chart that…, We can draw the , conclusion that …, We can learn/know that…等。 , 4.图表作文的写作模板 图表作文的写作模板 As is shown in the table (or in the picture), dropped from in 1994 to in 1996 According to the figures given in the table, has great increased (or decreased) in the past … years (or decades), reaching in 1996. From the table we can also see that there has been a sharp decline (or rise) in … It is clear that … There are at least two good reasons for For one thing, . Let’s have an example to illustrate the great increase in .For another thing, is due to the fact that . In addition, is responsible for .Maybe there are some other reasons to show . But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable. As far as I am concerned, . So my conclusion is that . I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. 【真题体验】 (请根据对某校 2004-2007 年这段时间学生中拥有 QQ 号人数的调查写一篇文章,要求 描述变化并得出结论,词数 150 左右。

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【范文】 As is shown in the chart, the rate of students who owned QQs increased in the past four years from 2004 to 2007. Back in 2004, only 20% of them have QQs; one year later, the rate becomes twice larger; compared with about 50% in 2006, the rate in 2007 rose to 60%. Clearly, it is tending to increase. In my opinion, the increase can be accounted for two factors. For one thing, the widespread use of the Internet makes it convenient for students to communicate with each other. For another, QQ provides all kinds of entertainments, such as playing games and enjoying music. What’s more, QQ has gradually become the main means for the public to know the latest news. Personally, students should make proper use of and not be addicted to QQ, and only so can it serve its purpose beautifully.

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写作步骤: Ⅰ.读图:Topics of cartoons

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Ⅱ.解意(theme)to the point 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues), 切记要认真阅读!! ! 1. 辨明褒贬,找准角度 (angle) 2. 联系生活,明晰主旨 (theme) Ⅲ.谋篇 organization Step1. Description (图片描述,注意人称/时态) Sentence structures: As is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are… The picture shows a common phenomenon. …… step2. Analysis (现象分析,联系实际分析) ( facts / reasons/results…) Sentence structures: 1. What are the reasons for this phenomenon? 2.It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. … 3.The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… … 4.The picture indicates that we…/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that… … 5.This is a ironic (讽刺的 cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon 讽刺的) 讽刺的 among…… Step3. Solutions (建议或解决方法) 注意:从大到小;从远到近; 注意:从大到小;从远到近;从意识到行动 As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion, ’ From my point of view,… It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to… ●The government should make laws to… ●The media should appeal for … ●We should raise people’s awareness of… ●Everyone should make great efforts to… Only in this way can…./Only if…, can we…

例文: 1、 漫画作文(酒后驾车问题) 、 漫画作文(酒后驾车问题) This is a picture which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country. In the picture, a drunk driver is caught speeding. He has drunk so much that he can’t walk normally. How can he drive a car in such bad condition? It is well known that drunk driving has been the leading cause of road accidents, but some people still drive after drinking. What are the reasons for the phenomenon? The lack of safety awareness is the direct reason why there exists so much drunk driving. Besides, some people believe that drinking a little does no harm to their driving. If traffic accidents happen, it will be too late for them to regret what they have done. Drunk driving is a great danger both to our society and to drivers. It is necessary to forbid drinking before driving. It’s time we took some measures to make a total ban on it. Firstly, we should reinforce the traffic security education to raise people’s awareness towards safety. Secondly, the government should make stricter laws about it and punish drunk drivers severely. Thirdly, we can make posters and signs warning people not to drive after drinking. In my opinion , the approaches above should be followed and gradually spread out all over the country. Only in this way can people build up their self-conscience and pay enough attention to their daily driving. If we can keep on doing this, the road accidents will decrease soon in the future. 2、 图表分析(叙述海外人员归国情况,分析回流原因,并希望更多的海外学者回国创业) 、 图表分析(叙述海外人员归国情况,分析回流原因,并希望更多的海外学者回国创业 多的海外学者回国创业) There has been a reversal of the brain drain since 1978 across the country. Between 1978 and 2007, about 7,000 overseas Chinese returned to Shanghai after completing their studies abroad. They accounted for about 25% of all returnees nationwide. The year 2008 witnessed a boom. The

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number of returnees came up to 15,000. By the end of 2010, a further 22,000 will

have returned to this city. The reversal of the brain drain mainly arises from three facts. Firstly, our government values overseas Chinese scholars highly, and has worked out a series of preferential policies. In Shanghai, they can enjoy a modern lifestyle. Secondly, China’s economy has been developing at a high speed, which provides them with a vast space of development. Thirdly, the current global financial crisis leaves many overseas Chinese out of work or at the edge of being laid off. They feel more secure at home because the economy is more stable. I hope that more overseas Chinese can head home. There is a bright future ahead of them. 3. 观点对比(是否增加燃油税): 观点对比(是否增加燃油税) With the new fuel tax policy taking effect on January 1, more and more people show great concerns about what it brings to their life. Some people are in favour of the policy. They think it is reasonable and fair to carry out the policy, because the more the fuel consumption, the more money the drivers pay, which can avoid the unnecessary driving. They also think when the policy will help to reduce air pollution and benefit the environment. In their opinion, fuel tax can raise the awareness of using oil efficiently. However, others are against it. For one thing, they think China is developing country, so we can’t do as the developed countries do. For another, the new fuel policy may increase the fuel price. Drivers will pay higher fuel consumption taxes and may be overburdened. Also, they hold the opinion that the new policy may cause more unemployment. As a result, there might be some other social problems. As far as I’m concerned, though some people may feel unhappy when paying more for fuel at the beginning, this form will surely benefit the environment and help to promote a healthy development of economy in the long term. Therefore, we should welcome this decision and support it.

4.现象分析(读书无用论) .现象分析(读书无用论) According to a recent news report, in Chongqing City, there are a great number of students who abandoned opportunities to receive further education in college. This is the so-called idea of uselessness of study. Recently we have had a heated discussion about the phenomenon in our class. We all think there are several factors accounting for this phenomenon. Firstly, college education is a huge expense foraverage families at present, Secondly, the knowledge acquired in college is not so closely related to students’ future career. What is more, it’s really hard for a graduate to find a satisfying job due to the severe competition in job-markets. As far as I am concerned, the idea of uselessness of study is wrong and misleading. It is knowledge that enables one to succeed in job-hunting. To solve this problem, on the one hand, the government should take measures to reduce the expense of education. On the other hand, students should work hard at the required subjects and at the same time they can select other subjects so that they will be well equipped for future jobs. Yours, Li Hua 5. 期末考试看图作文(火灾自救) 期末考试看图作文(火灾自救) Such frequent fires set us thinking. Why have so many people lost their lives to fires? Lack of necessary self-saving skills make people less likely to survive fires. When it comes to the fires, it’s required that we be calm. With a calm mind, we can attempt to save ourselves. If this doesn’t work, we have no alternative but to ask for help. First and foremost, we are supposed to tell the rescuers the accurate position where we are in a gesture to save time. What’s more, in course of the rescue, don’t be panic but be patient. Also, some

tips enable us not to choke in the smoke. A wet towel is favorable for us to breathe smoothly. Make sure to go bending when the smoke climbs up. Having mastered these practical skills, any fires can’t pose a threat to us unless we cut our way . 4

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篇五:2011年全国高考英语作文真题与范文汇总

2011年全国各地高考英语作文汇编及参考范文

1. (2011·全国I/新课标卷)

假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你须书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:1.本人简介; 2.求助内容; 3.约定时间;4.你的联系方式(Email:[email protected];Phone:12345678)

Dear Sir/Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I'm writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: [email protected]; 12345678.

Yours,

Li Hua

2.(2011·全国II)

假定你是李华,你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见.请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括: 1.说明你是该报的忠实读者 2.赞赏该报优点: 1)兼顾国内外新闻

2)介绍名人成功故事 3.提出建议: 刊登指导英语学习的文章

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reassons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.

As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English leaarning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

3.(2011·辽宁卷)

假定你是李华,将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业,你从报纸上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘书,

:1、年龄;2、学习情况及英语水平;3、兴趣和特长;4、性格特点。

4.(2011·湖北卷)

Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people. 注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语; ②除诗歌外,文体不限; ③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例; ④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称; ⑤词数为100左右。

5.(2011·四川卷)

最近,某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目,请你根据以下提示,为该栏目写一篇英文稿1.你校开展课外活动的情况;

2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处;

3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议;

4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议

After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and eiching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.

Here I have some suggestions. To students, you’d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning.

6.(2011·北京卷)

第一节 情景作文(20分)

假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华。下面四幅图表述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事,请根据图片的先后顺序,为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文,词数不少于60。

第二节(2011·北京卷)开放作文(15分)

请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the

picture and explain how you understand it.

6.(2011·天津卷)

假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托,负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给该团的领队Smith

介绍活动计划并简要说明理由,最后征求对方意见。上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等);中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等);下午与我校学生游览海河。

7.(2011·江西卷)

假设你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。

主要内容包括:1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题。2.骑自行车的益处,如能环保有利健康等。 参考词汇:低碳生活(low-carbon life)节能(energy saving)

8.(2011·广东卷)

第一节:基础写作

以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道

基本信息:

⑴书名:Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

⑵作者:Amy Chua,美籍华人,耶鲁*大学教授

⑶出版时间:2010年

⑷内容:作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事

⑸效应:引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论

相关报道:

⑴中文版:2011年初开始在中国销售

⑵意外反应:多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法

⑶最新消息:17岁的大女儿已被哈佛**和耶鲁录取

*耶鲁:Yale哈佛:Harvard

[写作内容]

根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍,内容包括:

1.图书的基本信息

2.图书的相关报道

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯

第二节:读写任务

阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120

⑴时间、地点和起因;

⑵想家给学习和生活带来的影响;

⑶你(或你朋友)是如何应对的。

[写作要求]

1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

9.(2011·江苏卷)

下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片

的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容:

1. 描述照片内容,如情景、人物、动作,等等;

2. 结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想;

3.

举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load

of

parents has received little attention, especially from their own

children.

The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.

All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay my attention to what mother needs and